Started looking at lighting, need to work on the light in the apple world. I have removed one of the soldiers because it was getting a little crowdy, however I will work on the crime scene in the burnt corner, (grave of a soldier, outline of a body) so there remains the traces of a third character in the foreground. A new, smaller wagon should make things less crowded as well. The landscape at the back will be an explosion in the distance, whilst the front left lighting should be more subtle. The narrative will now be based around an ambush on the soldiers, the apple has been waiting for them all along.