Sunday, 16 May 2010

The Burnt Box

1 comment:

  1. its looking great! I see the apple world is almost there. the 3 soldiers look strong now in the foreground.
    few things . maybe you are alreday working on them i am guessing
    1. background- changing the blue to some scene of the distant hills. create the idea of 'diatance'
    2.Sharpnel- soem fragmented quailty needs to be placed in the foreground. this will add to the tension in space. either though bits of coloured plastic , wires or something such.
    3. Lights.
    4. take some fantastic close-up and perspective A3 shots of the distinct views that characters see in your world. What is the apple seeing? What are each of the soldiers looking at? etc..